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"I'm not doing it!" You heard Bakura snap and panicked. You ran for the cabinets and opened one. It was fall of messy blankets that looked like someone had just dumped them in there. There was still enough room for you so you climbed in, shut the door and prayed they didn't need a blanket.
   
"You'll do as I say!" An older and slightly overweight man shouted back, entering the living room.
   
"Dad, I'm not marrying her just because she has money!" Bakura shouted and you saw that he was an inch taller than his dad through the crack between the cabinet doors.
   
"You're legally under age so you'll do as I say. I don't care what you've done that makes you think you're big, but this is what I'm saying so you'll do it." Bakura's dad said and sat in the recliner.
   
"I'll marry someone I love, not someone just to pay for your drinking and gambling addictions!" Bakura screamed, his face becoming red with anger.
   
"The only women you love are ones who you can pay." Bakura's father spat and Bakura recoiled slightly.
   
"Mum would never make me do this." Bakura said quietly, picking a picture up off the mantle-piece above a broken gas fire.
   
"Yes, a mother who loved you so much she left her darling two year-old son with his drunken father." The older man said and knocked the picture from Bakura's hand and it landed in front of the cabinet you were hidden in.
   
From where you where you could make out the picture. A baby was being cradled by a beautiful, smiling woman with thick, white hair while a slim man smiled too with his arm around her. The woman had Bakura's hair and pointed face while the man had his sharp nose and brown eyes. You realised this must have been Bakura when he was little with his parents.
   
"You know what? You're a lousy son!" Bakura's father, who was nothing like the man in the picture now, shouted and stormed from the room.
   
"Where are you going?" Bakura called and you thought you could hear hurt in his voice.
   
"Where the bloody Hell do you think?" Was all that was said before the door slammed shut.
   
Bakura sighed. "Pub." he said and fell onto the sofa, placing his elbows on his knees and placed his head in his hands, gripping the roots of his ragged, white hair.
   
You wanted nothing more than to run out and comfort him but you decided to stay hidden.
   
After five eternally long minutes, Bakura got up and walked towards the cabinet you were hiding in.
   
One moment you heart was beating way to loudly and then it stopped when he was right outside picking up the photo.
   
You pulled a blanket over you in case he decided to look.
   
"Why did you leave me, Mum?" Bakura whispered.
   
You whimpered, how could his father be so mean, and then you froze in terror. Surely he heard that!
   
He did. He opened the cabinet and you could feel his eyes looking in.
   
Please don't see that I'm here!!! you prayed.
   
Apparently he didn't because he closed the door and you heard him leave the room followed by the click of a kettle being turned on and a cupboard opening.
   
You took your chance, opened the cupboard and ran as quietly as you could out of the house.
   
You ran down the street and collapsed in an alley a few streets away.
   
Now you had time to think, you realised you were clutching the blanket you'd been hiding under and that it was raining.
   
You pulled the hood up on your coat and buried your face in the sheet - that had been way too close!
   
The blanket smelled like Bakura, and for some odd reason, you found it comforting.

You bundled up the sheet, tucked it under your coat and started home, just as your heart rate started returning to normal.
Yeah, I know the end was a little naff but that's all I could think of how to end it, any better suggestions would be welcome!!

So, this chapter was just a little history on Bakura really, and one of those ones where you're thinking 'don't hide in the cupboard!!!!' but, because my writing is predictable, you do! Whoops...

I'm glad people are enjoying this so far, I'm definitely enjoying writing it!

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Slasher130 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
I. I need more. Please. I'm sure to die of heartbreak if I don't find out what happens. I understand if you can't think of anything, trust me I go through the same struggles, but even a little bit will mend my heart.
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thecookieninja42 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student Artist
I love this
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One-life-to-end Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bummer.. :c
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014
that I haven't updated? yeah... I keep forgetting... "^ω^
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One-life-to-end Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Woo, I guess I need to keep a regular schedule of reminders! xD Miss lady.
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lobospade Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student Artist
Please continue!!!
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
there are plans for it to continue but right now it's stuck on hiatus, I'm sorry :c
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lobospade Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Student Artist
Its alright. Take your time! :3
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wolfbite157107 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Where's 1 and 2
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
part 1: shadow--9.deviantart.com/art/Setting-The-Scene-Bakura-x-Reader-Part-1-342032980
part 2: shadow--9.deviantart.com/art/No-Stalking-Bakura-x-Reader-Part-2-342203606
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wolfbite157107 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student General Artist
thanks
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all3nwalker Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Please update!
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
I am currently working on an update (huzzah) but I don't know when it will be up...
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EeveeGamerGirl Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
2012? JEEEEEESUS
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
I knnnoooooow, I'm sorry but the end of my exams is now in sight and then I PROMISE an update!!!!
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EeveeGamerGirl Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gyaaa@@@
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20percentcooldash Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
ELLLLOOOOS?
;~;
Finiiish..
Pweaaase?
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
Ok, I finally have an end date for my exams so I will definitely be able to work on it again in about a month! Promise! I might just redo the entire thing, idk, but it'll be better...

Hopefully.
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20percentcooldash Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
Yay!
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tailslover116 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
PLEASE FINISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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One-life-to-end Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
;_; you never finished it...
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
I keep meaning to!! I'm sorry!!! ;_;
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One-life-to-end Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, yeah I know. I'm a patient person I just wanted to be silly.
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CuriousCat-13 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good, please make more!!!!!
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One-life-to-end Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How about she dropped an earring in the cupboard, bakura recognized it from when he sat next to her. The next time they are at school he tries to confront her, but she keeps getting pulled away. The same day she kept avoiding him without intention she finds out that both her parents and younger sister were killed in a car crash (make it emotional) while she sees them she faints from the stress and hits her head. The entire time his blanket was in her back back. While knocked out she falls into a coma, not waking up, during the time she was out her friends gathered her stuff and bakura helped. He knew she heard everything and was pissed that she snooped, but in a way he was happy to know someone knows now how he really is, day by day as they pack her stuff he sees the memories she drew, the way her mind worked in her art, some made him smile, some sad, through her art he got to know her, a pain came to his heart, not a bad one but a good one. He started visting her until one day she woke up, they call tea and she calls everyone else. I mean.. I could expand if you want and make you another 8 chapters if you want and you can take the credit.. I noticed you mentioned suggestions what i advised is just for starters. You are a genius writer so I'm sure you can do it.
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One-life-to-end Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't wait to read more lol ;)
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
No, you are the genius. You are amazing! I'll probably use a variation of this and will finally be able to finish writing this!!!!! Fufufufu!!! You're great!!!!! Thank you!!!

And you will get credit, no worries!
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One-life-to-end Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad I could be of some help. :D Your story was just so intruiging I love it. :D
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mentallyScarred Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so friggin awesome. :iconpervyyamibakuraplz: A++ 10000/10 Would reccomend. >: D
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Aww!! Thank you!! :iconcryingrainbowsplz:
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mentallyScarred Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, broski :iconshaplz:
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Stephie-chan559 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I lov blankets!
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Stephie-chan559 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
More plz a new fav
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ChoppyChua Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hope you get over writers block soon, I really wanna know what happens next :D Excellent story ^^
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cartoonlovinggal Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please continue! Its so nice! 
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
Awww, thank you!!! *lots of hugs* I am trying but writers block is plaguing me...
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cartoonlovinggal Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry, I'm sure you'll be inspired somehow. If you need help with ideas or plot holes, I'm happy to help :D
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miku-chanxox Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
;3 I got the blanket~! Lol D: no CURSE YOU WRITERS BLOCK!
Q-Q Please overcome the writers block and make more of this wonderful story!

Cheering for you!
Lyn
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
Aw!! Thank you! :iconcryingrainbowsplz:
My holidays are coming up soon so I promise I'll sit down and try and think of some more!
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miku-chanxox Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU!!! :D
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Aezaylea Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome! I stole his blanket too!
And aww... I need to inherit some money or something amd marry him.
Kehe.
And power through the writers block! Don't let it take another victim!
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I love it I cant wait to read more :D
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Aimi12 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great story please continue!
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
Thanks!! I'll type up what I have this week. I've justhad exams and stuff so I've had no time. :(
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Aimi12 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok take your time let me know when chapter 4 is up
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Grace0331 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Plz continue! I love story's wich talk about the reader and an original character! Can't wait for the next part! :iconmonkeyloveplz:
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
Thank you so much!!!!! Just trying to figure out how to link the next part...
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Grace0331 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmm... So you don't know how to link your story right? Mabey I can help you!

here-> FAQ #81: How can I create links to other deviants, deviations, or websites?

I hope this can help you! ^^
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Shadow--9 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
Thank you, but I mean as in ideas, linking them together.
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KangarooJess135 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really good, I've been looking for something like this for a while now. Keep it up and I can't wait for the next one. ^^
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